tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6395683032879783195.post1270791209639306140..comments2023-05-28T02:23:19.632-07:00Comments on Sand in my shoes: Some comments about CristopherSand in my shoeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06430887509519856172noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6395683032879783195.post-25905650017473521172008-12-08T11:03:00.000-08:002008-12-08T11:03:00.000-08:00Hey, Laia!I'm reading this book now, and I enjoy i...Hey, Laia!<BR/><BR/>I'm reading this book now, and I enjoy it a lot! I'm reading it in Spanish, but I think that reading it in English would have been a great idea.<BR/><BR/>I would like to speak about this book with you, so one day we could meet at "Cafeteca" and talk about it :) Or at home or in the street, but I'd really like to go to Cafeteca with you...<BR/><BR/>Lots of kisses! Have a nice week! And this Saturday... Jamboreeeee! :Direnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11646161457667313961noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6395683032879783195.post-68390385816315561282008-12-02T14:58:00.000-08:002008-12-02T14:58:00.000-08:00Good deal!I'm looking forward to reading your comm...Good deal!<BR/>I'm looking forward to reading your comments on different blogs and your own writings too!Nuria Vidalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05356267731854172902noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6395683032879783195.post-19209471792370095042008-11-21T00:56:00.000-08:002008-11-21T00:56:00.000-08:00I would prefer to not rephrase this two sentences ...I would prefer to not rephrase this two sentences because I don't want to explain with details the plot of the story. I just want to do a little comment about some ideas I've thought while I was reading. Maybe, there're some classmates who hasn't read the book yet.Sand in my shoeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06430887509519856172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6395683032879783195.post-69331738675079256852008-11-20T06:22:00.000-08:002008-11-20T06:22:00.000-08:00Well done!!!I'm glad you are enjoying the book, dr...Well done!!!<BR/>I'm glad you are enjoying the book, drawing conclusions with challenging "food for thought".<BR/><BR/>This is a nice little text. Well written with challenging structures but have a look at some language comments:<BR/><BR/>-Maybe he could be so weird, but in fact, we should follow his way. (I THINK THESE TWO SENTENCES NEED REPHRASING. THEY ARE NOT CLEAR WITHIN THE CONTEXT.)<BR/>-who whatchES carefully the patterns that there are everywhere in our LIVES? (IRREGULAR PLURAL!)<BR/>-they could MAKE US feel vivacious.<BR/>-and HE explainS (0) PERFECTLY, (WO "perfectly" is an adverb, thus it modifies the verb, not a noun.) his point of view.Nuria Vidalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05356267731854172902noreply@blogger.com