This is the way to go! Short, stimulating and persistent. Congratulations! I really like your little pieces! But it seems to me that you need a final sentence to round this piece off. What do you think?
See my comments:
-IS IT a man's world? -WOMEN are improving their situation. -as WELL as racist -It's our mind that (0) hasn't changed. -How many times have YOU HEARD "No, that's a question FOR my wife, tell her"?
I'm sorry!!!!!I don't know what have happened but I delete my post and now, I can't repeat...Moreover,I've correct my mistakes! I would like to say that I wanted to write an opened post. I would like that people answer me with the final question. I don't know.
I'm studying at the university. I love art: paintings, literature, sculpture, music, theatre, cinema... I'm not sure I'm studying the correct career but I enjoy it so much.
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This is the way to go! Short, stimulating and persistent. Congratulations! I really like your little pieces! But it seems to me that you need a final sentence to round this piece off. What do you think?
See my comments:
-IS IT a man's world?
-WOMEN are improving their situation.
-as WELL as racist
-It's our mind that (0) hasn't changed.
-How many times have YOU HEARD "No, that's a question FOR my wife, tell her"?
I'm sorry!!!!!I don't know what have happened but I delete my post and now, I can't repeat...Moreover,I've correct my mistakes!
I would like to say that I wanted to write an opened post. I would like that people answer me with the final question. I don't know.
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